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Hero

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Literature Text

I'm haunted by your image
Infected by your every lie
How can I believe your words?
"True love won't ever die"

So diverse from the others
In ways that weren't all pure
Only when my eyes were unlocked
Open wide to your true nature

A false image you performed
To try and lure me in
But I am not your game
I'm here to rid you of your sins

To me, the truth was known
Thought I could be your saviour
But I failed, and I'm sorry
Inside your heart; a traitor

Now you said, "I love you"
Said, "You are beautiful"
But trickery alone is not enough
Your words; unbelievable

I gave you your chance
You let yourself down
Your fate is in your hands
Do not give up... may a hero be found


Your image infected
Can true love die?
Diverse in ways
My eyes open wide

False image to try
But your game was known
I failed your heart
Now you are alone

Gave chance
Let down
Your fate
Not found
There's a hidden hero inside everyone. It just needs a key to be set free.

This poem is a story about my last boyfriend... it didn't work out too well.
I know I'm lucky to live the way I do, and that there are other people out there who have a really hard time. I just want to say that you're never alone, and that there will always be someone in your life who will try to help you. But your greatest asset is your willpower. You have the ability to have an amazing life...

I hope you found what you were looking for...


Please tell me your thoughts on this poem. I'm not too sure on the 5th stanza, I don't think it flows too well. If you could give me your opinion, I'd be grateful xx
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